tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4078278410744887002.post2626365580521381173..comments2024-02-14T01:24:18.355-08:00Comments on Angelina C. Hansen: Winner of SELLING HOPE and A Flash Fiction ChallengeAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00769602845843608247noreply@blogger.comBlogger87125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4078278410744887002.post-29960208931591110382011-09-24T22:58:33.313-07:002011-09-24T22:58:33.313-07:00This was intense, and extremely well done! Also i...This was intense, and extremely well done! Also incredibly horrifying, but thank goodness for the second to last line.Shannon Lawrencehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00934641808195675935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4078278410744887002.post-74727834248392540432011-09-21T17:05:11.058-07:002011-09-21T17:05:11.058-07:00Nothing more to add, Angelina. This was incredibl...Nothing more to add, Angelina. This was incredibly powerful writing. Your short lines made me modulate my breath to fit, ending with me being completely breathless.<br /><br />Excellently done, fellow campaigner!Elizabeth Mitchellhttp://lapidaryprose.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4078278410744887002.post-29771545506559977592011-09-14T10:38:52.798-07:002011-09-14T10:38:52.798-07:00Wow! Just...wow. A difficult subject done so well,...Wow! Just...wow. A difficult subject done so well, with that slight twist where the victim becomes, in a way, the "victor."<br /><br />(Mine is #253)Madeline Mora-Summontehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05529397293165046430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4078278410744887002.post-49450165266975053172011-09-13T17:48:25.701-07:002011-09-13T17:48:25.701-07:00Amazing. Even though your subject matter was dark,...Amazing. Even though your subject matter was dark, you still had me anticipating every word. Very, very well done.F.E. Sewellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04222968586032981217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4078278410744887002.post-69001833106419601052011-09-13T07:30:17.036-07:002011-09-13T07:30:17.036-07:00Holy. Cow. That was incredibly chilling and freaky...Holy. Cow. That was incredibly chilling and freaky and all in under 200 words! Way to go.Crystalhttp://littlebundleofcontradictions.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4078278410744887002.post-63272405944232178002011-09-13T05:18:24.452-07:002011-09-13T05:18:24.452-07:00Crickey! What a powerfully-written piece!Crickey! What a powerfully-written piece!Len Lamberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13394563639136301725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4078278410744887002.post-4604340285158399982011-09-12T13:46:14.894-07:002011-09-12T13:46:14.894-07:00I'm amazed at what you packed into 200 words. ...I'm amazed at what you packed into 200 words. It's so full of emotion. Heartbreaking, but well done.Angela Perryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15598455060979053040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4078278410744887002.post-53303159174717403642011-09-12T12:26:58.215-07:002011-09-12T12:26:58.215-07:00Sheesh, I was kind of breathless by the end of tha...Sheesh, I was kind of breathless by the end of that. Tense, heartbreaking, rooting for the character that she'll be able to "catch out" her abuser without him catching her first...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06181241692016438730noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4078278410744887002.post-38978722124517989542011-09-12T12:19:32.790-07:002011-09-12T12:19:32.790-07:00Wonderfully written, and so different to anything ...Wonderfully written, and so different to anything else I've seen so far. I was right there with her, feeling the panic.Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07138682498522090332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4078278410744887002.post-77230195867071885112011-09-12T06:53:01.684-07:002011-09-12T06:53:01.684-07:00This is so fantastic, Angelina :) Kept me engaged,...This is so fantastic, Angelina :) Kept me engaged, lightning quick, and visceral too! A favorite :) WOOT!<br /><br />MarieMarie Andrewshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05483640008622878711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4078278410744887002.post-36199167610772799402011-09-12T02:52:18.652-07:002011-09-12T02:52:18.652-07:00Hi,
Stunning piece! I say that in the literal sen...Hi,<br /><br />Stunning piece! I say that in the literal sense. Gee! ;)<br /><br />best<br />FFrancine Howarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02326542867876257042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4078278410744887002.post-48429033835475842582011-09-11T11:09:16.264-07:002011-09-11T11:09:16.264-07:00Wow, that was intense. A emotional subject handled...Wow, that was intense. A emotional subject handled with skill and creativity. Love the cellphone getting evidence. Fantastic piece. You get my vote :)Claire Hennessyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16576410137759875223noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4078278410744887002.post-15792272975013561932011-09-11T01:24:37.322-07:002011-09-11T01:24:37.322-07:00Wow, that was gripping and beautiful.Wow, that was gripping and beautiful.Balin Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01154209809663255398noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4078278410744887002.post-757992095759785042011-09-10T19:33:47.843-07:002011-09-10T19:33:47.843-07:00Wow. This is gorgeous. I am so glad I found you. W...Wow. This is gorgeous. I am so glad I found you. What a powerful piece.Christa Desirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15614441465633549710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4078278410744887002.post-73244180344594620742011-09-10T19:14:05.351-07:002011-09-10T19:14:05.351-07:00That was so powerful! Great job! :)That was so powerful! Great job! :)Carrie Butlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01540590799406170410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4078278410744887002.post-43360840475435766852011-09-10T16:45:19.782-07:002011-09-10T16:45:19.782-07:00Love the way you decided to handle the structure o...Love the way you decided to handle the structure of this piece. Very moving.Lisa Pottshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11676087488599338569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4078278410744887002.post-15832771020946721802011-09-10T15:57:24.648-07:002011-09-10T15:57:24.648-07:00Amazingly written, Angelina. My heart was pounding...Amazingly written, Angelina. My heart was pounding while I read this. Great tension.Author A.O. Pearthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09522726537375775560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4078278410744887002.post-64416665531140724722011-09-10T12:55:46.375-07:002011-09-10T12:55:46.375-07:00OMG! So good.OMG! So good.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07253166034862608647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4078278410744887002.post-4669023635190161942011-09-10T10:17:45.838-07:002011-09-10T10:17:45.838-07:00I could feel the tension all the way through this ...I could feel the tension all the way through this piece. I love the way the lines are so short but communicate so much.Golden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4078278410744887002.post-40792538269118095522011-09-10T09:17:11.491-07:002011-09-10T09:17:11.491-07:00CONGRATULATIONS! You have been shortlisted as one...CONGRATULATIONS! You have been shortlisted as one of the top 5 to move on to stage two. There will be a semi-final (stage three) and a final (stage four).<br /><br />I judged this round and found your piece to be exceptional! Congrats!Melissa Deanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10677077308421607728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4078278410744887002.post-67039159058540738322011-09-10T08:52:58.751-07:002011-09-10T08:52:58.751-07:00WOW, I'm still chilled. That was great! Fell...WOW, I'm still chilled. That was great! Fellow campaigner and new follower! I also write YA! Great job!Melissa Deanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10677077308421607728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4078278410744887002.post-46731850016009563452011-09-10T07:32:09.869-07:002011-09-10T07:32:09.869-07:00Love the structure and pace of this piece. The ten...Love the structure and pace of this piece. The tension is palpable. Good work!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06573809532018015486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4078278410744887002.post-17537808658287438752011-09-10T06:41:59.812-07:002011-09-10T06:41:59.812-07:00Excellent! I think since our pieces both dealt wi...Excellent! I think since our pieces both dealt with anxiety/fear that this format is such a great way to convey the feeling of being trapped. Really well done.junebughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16597959014121851131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4078278410744887002.post-40130252131492106112011-09-10T04:09:30.469-07:002011-09-10T04:09:30.469-07:00I find it amazing how much can be conveyed in 200 ...I find it amazing how much can be conveyed in 200 words. So much in the white space in between each breath, isn't there?Kelly McClymerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04038223302234193266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4078278410744887002.post-34414968396786748322011-09-10T02:28:03.878-07:002011-09-10T02:28:03.878-07:00Fantastic poem, fantastic story.
AliBFantastic poem, fantastic story.<br />AliBAliBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09611113709872287863noreply@blogger.com